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MysticG
I hope you will continue to read. I tend to write more when I am sad or struggling, but not always. That seems to be an artist thing in general, perhaps why we are always difficult. ;)
posted by
Temple
on August 6, 2005 at 6:37 PM
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temple
your poetry is pleasurable to read, even the sad, has a gentle feel on my mind. believe it or not i think this is the first time i have visited you. i will return
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on August 6, 2005 at 5:00 PM
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pakner
thank you, I appreciate the comment :)
posted by
Temple
on August 6, 2005 at 1:05 AM
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i'm drowning.....beautiful poem
posted by
pakner
on August 5, 2005 at 5:38 AM
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MaxWest
I often feel my words come from somewhere else, the universe, somewhere inspired. I was away from the ocean for years, too long...can't ever do it again. Like leaving my soul behind. Thank you for reading and leaving a footprint.
posted by
Temple
on July 30, 2005 at 12:24 AM
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WhiteJedi
The ocean's quiet strength fills me....it seems to be a place for me to recharge. Glad it showed through. I appreciate the read and the comment, thank you.
posted by
Temple
on July 30, 2005 at 12:22 AM
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Cass
I've always said the ocean is my church....I just close my eyes and I can smell the air and hear the waves. Or, hop in my car and be there in 5 minutes....but it always brings me to center.
posted by
Temple
on July 30, 2005 at 12:20 AM
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Yes, I know that feeling well...
I write a lot of these myself: poems that really the sea seems to be writing through me. I always get this aching feeling to return when I've been away too long, and every time I do I always leave with a song, filled with very much the same kind of sway and salt as yours :) -M
posted by
MaxWest
on July 29, 2005 at 6:20 PM
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different. Vibrant-the ocean's energy and quiet strength fills your poem.
posted by
WhiteJedi
on July 26, 2005 at 9:45 AM
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The ocean, the beach, the sand - all definitely places of renewal.
posted by
Ca88andra
on July 26, 2005 at 2:46 AM
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Vane
thanks, you do it in your template
posted by
Temple
on July 25, 2005 at 8:33 PM
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Beautiful poem
How do I post a comment invite?
posted by
Vanidad
on July 25, 2005 at 8:27 PM
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ohhhhh...
yeah, thought I'd change it up a bit :)
posted by
Temple
on July 25, 2005 at 8:25 PM
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"Hey don't sneak off, tell me what you think"
posted by
Katray2
on July 25, 2005 at 8:24 PM
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katray, what is a comment invite?
Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :)
posted by
Temple
on July 25, 2005 at 8:20 PM
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Hey Temple, like that comment invite ;)
The poem flows gentle and reaching as the sea herself.
posted by
Katray2
on July 25, 2005 at 8:13 PM
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