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schree, Thanks for your interest. Truth is I feel the same way about my
other daughter too, who is less prodigal.
posted by
kingmi
on September 11, 2005 at 7:08 PM
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I love and understand this poem..thanks for writing it!! Schree`
posted by
Schree
on September 11, 2005 at 5:16 PM
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Tweeter, Yes, thank you. This is my learned style of poetry that is dif-
ferent from the traditional poetry seen on Blogit!. Mine I guess is what is known as blank verse poetry. But, yes also, to your question about my daughter. 1. By "I guess I'm Daddy" what I meant was, I'm now as emotionally incapable of describing my feelings -- no wait -- expressing my feelings as my own father was, that was not clear. 2. When I wrote "Can't you hear my heart beeP" that was intended, as when this child was two, she thought the word was beep, as in 'Dad, i can hear your heart beeping'" 3. And this was all precipitated because her mother has found a three bedroom upstairs downstairs flat and has extra room. Sos she's moved out again. I think she'll be back, but I still have traditional father-tyope duties like buy textbooks, pick me up when I have a flat or run out of gas, drop off her sister for school every day etc. They will ride together in her car... Hey thanks for the interest. It is sheer flattery!
posted by
kingmi
on July 26, 2005 at 7:29 PM
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King
This is fresh from you mind to the page right? i hope my understanding is correct. About your girl who grew up? I like it-- very sweet.
posted by
Tweeter65
on July 26, 2005 at 2:47 PM
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