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You express yourself well,
with poetry.  Sometimes, it gives us a release,  writing poetry. 

posted by jacentaOld on July 7, 2005 at 10:53 PM | link to this | reply

wow--there's a lot of emotion coming out loud and clear.

posted by Julia. on July 5, 2005 at 9:27 PM | link to this | reply

Nice going!

Great rhythm and meter, and the imagery is fine, too. But the passion, the human story, is the glue that holds this poem together. You can almost hear it coming through the mikes to an audience at a poetry slam! 

posted by Pat_B on July 5, 2005 at 1:59 PM | link to this | reply