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You express yourself well,
with poetry. Sometimes, it gives us a release, writing poetry.
posted by
jacentaOld
on July 7, 2005 at 10:53 PM
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wow--there's a lot of emotion coming out loud and clear.
posted by
Julia.
on July 5, 2005 at 9:27 PM
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Nice going!
Great rhythm and meter, and the imagery is fine, too. But the passion, the human story, is the glue that holds this poem together. You can almost hear it coming through the mikes to an audience at a poetry slam!
posted by
Pat_B
on July 5, 2005 at 1:59 PM
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