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I like your animal guide as well as your imagination. Your style is easy to follow and lulls a reader into your comfort zone. I thank you for an enjoyable journey.
posted by
stpwriter1
on July 1, 2005 at 6:16 PM
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That snake part does make it hard to imagine! I pictured a field of daisies from a campground I used to go to when I was in high school - so the trees were pine trees mostly. That animal would have been a deer - but I'm sure I would have seen it BEFORE the snake, not after!
posted by
DarrkeThoughts
on June 30, 2005 at 9:51 AM
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