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Good quatrain!!
Mystic
This is very good! Why don't we make that the first quatrain of SONNET III? What do you think?
Now try the couplet. Couplets are easy once you get the knack.
posted by
Ebb.and.Flow
on June 23, 2005 at 8:32 PM
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Ebb
i think i did it:-) let me know: Never done a sonnet in my life
You and Muser have challenged me to stretch myself...thanks, kinda like Justsouno with the bible quiz
I surrender, I pull back, I give me
where are we going, will i know regret
this is truly not myself I now see
laughter, loving, playing, then i will fret.
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on June 23, 2005 at 8:07 PM
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sonnet input is great... keep it coming
mask
I was just excited that you wrote them! I am happy to include them.
mystic
just add your ideas like you are... I'll work out the format...
posted by
Ebb.and.Flow
on June 23, 2005 at 7:51 PM
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Ebb
Thank you, dear friend, for penning my words. ~~curtsey~~bow~~smile
posted by
behindamask
on June 23, 2005 at 11:29 AM
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Ebb
"seek the lilac"...within a dream
I just added a couple words to Muser's creative thought. I refrain from more input as I don't know the sonnet format and would mess you all up :-) I'm not an educated poet, rather a muse directed one, and my particular muse isn't a stickler for detail, actually she can be kind of loose ended:-)
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on June 23, 2005 at 9:05 AM
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O.K., I got ahead of myself...next three lines...
Then suddenly you throw the covers back
Oh no! What have I done? I hear you scream
You dress, hair wild, saying, "Seek the lilac..."
posted by
muser
on June 23, 2005 at 1:27 AM
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I like the new direction, muser... BUT...
don't forget that we need to have end rhymes that are EFEF... gotta stay true to the sonnet form!
I'm a stickler for detail.
posted by
Ebb.and.Flow
on June 23, 2005 at 12:34 AM
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next three lines? how about...
Then suddenly you throw the covers back
Oh no! What have I done? I hear you scream
You dress, look back, and say don't follow me...
posted by
muser
on June 23, 2005 at 12:17 AM
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