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You have to stay on the ride...LOL! I like that
Can I get it on a Tee-shirt? Size: Large.
posted by
Passionflower
on June 26, 2005 at 9:32 PM
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I really like this...
your metaphor is vivid and playful
and the emotional impact is sentimental without being cloying
posted by
Ebb.and.Flow
on June 25, 2005 at 1:38 AM
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Life's like that...
unusual and you have to stay on the ride.
posted by
food4thought
on June 22, 2005 at 10:12 PM
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Cute poem...a bit unusual.
posted by
Passionflower
on June 22, 2005 at 9:46 PM
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