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Great!
It reminds me of when I was young and gazing out the window watching the rain, with that 'wet' smell in the air.
Nice!
posted by
Hammock_Noweilz
on May 21, 2005 at 10:06 AM
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beauitiful as usual
posted by
1965stories
on May 21, 2005 at 9:06 AM
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this is amazing!! so very good!
A true metaphor to life, from birth to death! so many of lives become so!
posted by
Elan27
on May 21, 2005 at 7:51 AM
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Very nice poem OI!
posted by
Julia.
on May 20, 2005 at 3:16 PM
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original,
superb!
red
posted by
redlunar
on May 20, 2005 at 7:00 AM
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great work...
Take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on May 20, 2005 at 6:12 AM
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