Go to MY DEATH..
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Such a cool flow in your poem
posted by
Straightforward
on May 24, 2005 at 7:22 AM
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Hi michael_pilarte,
Nice job on this. At times, if I don't write a poem when thought of, I lose it. I have to write it down immediately. jacenta
posted by
jacentaOld
on May 15, 2005 at 6:19 AM
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Strong emotion here. Sad.
Good poem.
posted by
saul_relative
on May 14, 2005 at 6:06 PM
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Good work, good poem, good stuff.
This is really, really nice work. I believe you wrote it so fast because you are a fountain of emotions.
I feel like I could have wrote this at one point in my life.
Thanks for the read.
posted by
Hammock_Noweilz
on May 12, 2005 at 4:28 AM
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