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Nice work. For being rather long, it kept me interested. I remember a moonlight beach in Encintas Ca. Sharks use to visit this beach too.
posted by
ThomasFranklin
on May 7, 2005 at 7:15 PM
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nice writing...and your a very pretty girl Dark Dreamer. Thanks for the visit to my page. Glad you liked the poetry
posted by
MysticGmekeepr
on May 7, 2005 at 2:06 PM
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Nice prose. ;-)
(Ben)
posted by
A-and-B
on May 7, 2005 at 1:53 PM
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DarkDreamer
Interesting memories kiddo
posted by
WileyJohn
on May 6, 2005 at 9:24 PM
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Those were wonderful recollections. Pete sounds very patient.
Congrats! You got the answer for the Riddle.
Ben.
posted by
A-and-B
on May 6, 2005 at 1:56 PM
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Thanks for reading .... :)
I hope to make it more exciting as I move into the details and fix up the boring sentence structure ...I just had to get the basics down while I had a bit of time ...
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on May 6, 2005 at 12:54 PM
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This is very interesting, you have a nice writing style.
posted by
Julia.
on May 6, 2005 at 12:51 PM
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Wait until the wild stories
come pouring out .... I hope they are interesting ..... Thanks for stopping by ...
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on May 6, 2005 at 11:19 AM
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For a rough draft it looks pretty good
And interesting!
posted by
David1Spirit
on May 6, 2005 at 11:02 AM
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.....
First - in the small town of Sudbury Ontario - Canada
Second - They leer too, so you would get away with it .... 
posted by
Dark_Dreamer
on May 6, 2005 at 7:59 AM
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Item First: Where is Moonlight beach?
Item Next: How long can I hang out there before the local authorities haul me away under "suspicion of leering"?
posted by
mark2556
on May 5, 2005 at 2:22 PM
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