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posted by
Ciel
on March 8, 2005 at 6:43 PM
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Agreeing with KYMZ there, this poem has an EXCELLENT rhythm!!! See you Original!! VOYAGER9940
posted by
Voyager9940
on March 2, 2005 at 4:17 AM
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great poem
posted by
_Symphony_
on March 1, 2005 at 7:28 AM
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Very nice
I liked the rythem. It was like playng in the snow :)
posted by
kymz
on February 28, 2005 at 6:13 PM
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Original - I see myself fifty to sixty yerars ago--our hill, the barrels of fire at the top and the bottom for warming of hands, finally going inside and crying with the pain as I tried to warm my feet.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 28, 2005 at 6:02 PM
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Reminds me of the giant hill down the street from me where I grew up! Nice work!
-Ted
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on February 28, 2005 at 5:30 PM
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