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This is...

...very clever, to say the least!

I had no idea where you were going with this until the very last!

Kudos!
AJ

Just for a moment...                       
look for the light in the darkness    
that never had the chance to shine...
Imagine what could have been,     
if only things had been different... 
If you decide to take this journey,   
bring plenty of tissue,                    
because                                          
chances are good                           
that you'll need it...             
                  ENTER                       

posted by Ainsley_Jo_Phillips on September 18, 2005 at 2:07 PM | link to this | reply

The animals would need less care than the blogs. Interesting poem.

Ben.

posted by A-and-B on February 24, 2005 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply