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MiaElla,
By the way, I have finished reading your story and I thought it was very good. I will post more specific thoughts soon.
posted by
Dyl_Pickle
on February 22, 2005 at 6:53 PM
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DylanValente
Keep in mind this isn't a full/completed novel but a rough draft on one I'm going to write in the future...I only have a few minutes during the day to write, so it's the best I can do in several minutes....lol.
posted by
MiaElla
on February 11, 2005 at 10:37 PM
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I've printed out stories one through four and I'll read them with a cup of tea tonight. I can offer some suggestions if you'd like; it's what I live for!
posted by
Dyl_Pickle
on February 11, 2005 at 7:14 PM
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Nice dialogues still Miaella!
posted by
Voyager9940
on February 11, 2005 at 2:52 PM
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Gah, how did I miss the last update of this? At least I'm caught up now! (well, you had me caught at the beginning) ;-)
posted by
roofpig
on February 11, 2005 at 9:50 AM
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