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Superb...
   -Ted

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on February 2, 2005 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

Taps,
I have a feeling that you may be right!

posted by Original_Influence on February 2, 2005 at 4:19 AM | link to this | reply

Original - perhaps these wishes have something to do with the dreams that you are dying.   Maybe subconsciously you want to be relieved of the present diffulties in your life and somehow make it into a heaven on earth.

posted by TAPS. on February 1, 2005 at 8:44 PM | link to this | reply

Symphony,
sometimes I wish that too!!!

posted by Original_Influence on January 31, 2005 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

9457Sue,
hi ...thanks for reading!

posted by Original_Influence on January 31, 2005 at 4:12 PM | link to this | reply

Anthony1,
Thank you!!!

posted by Original_Influence on January 31, 2005 at 4:12 PM | link to this | reply

I wish I was a child again...
great poem

posted by _Symphony_ on January 31, 2005 at 7:42 AM | link to this | reply

beautiful........

posted by Star5_ on January 30, 2005 at 7:45 PM | link to this | reply

Original
You do have a way luv.

posted by WileyJohn on January 30, 2005 at 5:02 PM | link to this | reply

Just wanta bang on me
drum all day, hey. Yes and return to that childhood innocences.

posted by Moondawg on January 30, 2005 at 4:08 PM | link to this | reply

thanks voyager!!!

posted by Original_Influence on January 30, 2005 at 3:36 PM | link to this | reply

Dear Original, questions and pain in childhood... know what it means! Good poem! VOYAGER9940

posted by Voyager9940 on January 30, 2005 at 3:27 PM | link to this | reply