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I've critiqued your poems...
posted by
Ariala
on February 4, 2005 at 2:55 PM
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Okay, I'll get to these tomorrow...thanks for wanting to participate!
posted by
Ariala
on February 3, 2005 at 7:53 PM
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Geez, You Are Tough!
They are Part I and Part II. The two poems there were written together. Hot, romantic interlude with ex-lover turned Ms. Right Now...followed not long after with, "oh, so that's why I left this crazy person so fast last time."
Know whad I mean?
posted by
Volaar
on February 1, 2005 at 12:41 PM
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You need to submit the poem you want me to critique...I don't pick them
Thanks!
posted by
Ariala
on February 1, 2005 at 4:44 AM
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