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Mike - If you wrote it in two minutes, it must truely come from the heart. Writing from the intellect takes more time.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 25, 2005 at 8:21 AM
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Strong of heart and soul Mike.
Two minutes?? Amazing.
posted by
Katray2
on January 23, 2005 at 6:37 PM
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I like this poem...
I can feel the emotion in it....i always write them quickly and then rework them some...
posted by
Original_Influence
on January 23, 2005 at 1:06 PM
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Honestly, I hate poetry...
But this is really nice.
posted by
Renigade
on January 22, 2005 at 12:07 PM
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Mike, I used to live for others, my mom, dad, my brothers and sister.
I was in love and she was over there, so I lved for her, then I kind of didn't live much for a while, and then I started living for mys tudents. Now I live for myself. It isn't self-indulgent. Just mature I guess.
posted by
kingmi
on January 22, 2005 at 12:03 PM
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It is really good, lots of emotions, it's great!
posted by
poeticspoken
on January 22, 2005 at 10:12 AM
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I think it is really good.....very heartfelt
posted by
_Symphony_
on January 22, 2005 at 9:51 AM
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