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Sweet Mia, this piece is beautiful; it is captivating...
- Ted
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teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on January 21, 2005 at 9:54 AM
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Some really good lines--"the wind rattled my chin." love scriber
posted by
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on January 20, 2005 at 8:29 AM
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Mia
I love this (and I don't know who you have to sleep with to get your ratings to go up), you'll just wear yourself out for empty clicks.
posted by
Blanche.
on January 18, 2005 at 11:31 PM
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On Name Day
It was good.
posted by
bilingual-nth
on January 18, 2005 at 6:34 PM
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MiaElla--Nice dimpled chin. --love scriber
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on January 18, 2005 at 5:23 PM
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