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HAHAHA...................I don't have extreme dreams any more, want to live

because of my responsibilty two sweet hearts( my sons)...........that's all...........BTW check my new poem.

posted by Star5_ on January 14, 2005 at 9:08 PM | link to this | reply

sue, I think life is waiting for you to come back. Good things on the
horizon.

posted by kingmi on January 14, 2005 at 9:03 PM | link to this | reply

One time in my life I loved some one truley, very innocently, but
never .............I honestly love only one person in my life..........I never want to say the name.....years and years I loved that person.............but I don't know .............life was horrible to me..........

posted by Star5_ on January 14, 2005 at 8:55 PM | link to this | reply

9457sue, I am certain that you have a true love! Your poems told me so.

posted by kingmi on January 14, 2005 at 8:51 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Kingmi, Don't worry, I am fine, my imaginary rockstar, my best friend
never hurt me, so I am fine, but some one tried to pretend as rock star might hurt me, but I am safe to be alone in my dreams.........

posted by Star5_ on January 14, 2005 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

Sue, Since I followed your poems at the start of "rockstar" I feel sad now!

posted by kingmi on January 14, 2005 at 6:23 PM | link to this | reply

thank you klara roberts.......

posted by Star5_ on January 14, 2005 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

thanks shamsudeen

posted by Star5_ on January 14, 2005 at 6:16 PM | link to this | reply

thanks a lot cory321

posted by Star5_ on January 14, 2005 at 6:15 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you original

posted by Star5_ on January 14, 2005 at 6:15 PM | link to this | reply

Very nicely done!

posted by Original_Influence on January 13, 2005 at 6:01 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful! Wonderful! You're so nice, too.

posted by corycc321 on January 13, 2005 at 2:57 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely, Sue. Nice to see a poem from you again!

posted by KlaraRoberts on January 12, 2005 at 3:35 PM | link to this | reply

Good solid poetry, thanks, Sue

posted by Shams-i-Heartsong on January 12, 2005 at 6:07 AM | link to this | reply

thanks quirk..........

posted by Star5_ on January 11, 2005 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply

stand strong!

posted by Julia. on January 11, 2005 at 9:20 PM | link to this | reply

Thomas, some one lied to me a lot.........I knew it was all lies.....
But never said anything about it, so that person thought that I am a dummy........I didn't want to fight with a liar, so let it go.........but this year or more, I won't prefer to utter a word or not like to listen to that person..........so.

posted by Star5_ on January 10, 2005 at 10:42 PM | link to this | reply

Strong ending Sue! Lies in every breath. I like the ending. It really makes him out to a liar big time with every breath and I know thats  a lot.

posted by ThomasFranklin on January 10, 2005 at 10:40 PM | link to this | reply

Here I ammmmmmmmmmmmmmm

posted by Star5_ on January 10, 2005 at 10:35 PM | link to this | reply