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renigade3
wow, you typed it all in caps....that makes me happy....thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)
posted by
Temple
on February 2, 2005 at 1:28 PM
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Temple--WONDERFUL imagery...
posted by
Renigade
on February 2, 2005 at 1:14 PM
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Moohahaha
Probably some kind of slip there, yeah, that is likely. It was a surprise, but a happy one. I knew it was you almost immediately...nice to see you floating around. Hope all is well with you and the mister. :)
posted by
Temple
on February 2, 2005 at 1:11 PM
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Hi Quirky, and thank you.
I like those words, too....they fit really well there for me. Hope all is well with you. :)
posted by
Temple
on February 2, 2005 at 1:07 PM
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Original, stop by anytime...
Would you like some tea? :)
posted by
Temple
on February 2, 2005 at 1:03 PM
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Cass....
Thanks. :) I just try to decribe how the pain physically looks in my mind...or something....
posted by
Temple
on February 2, 2005 at 1:00 PM
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Hmmm, "foreward" instead of "forward" ...
does one detect a Freudian "foreplay" slip there? ;)
Very happy for you both :).
posted by
Moohahaha
on January 11, 2005 at 7:28 PM
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Yep baby...
you are correct about the different types of fuck, being one of the most versatile words in the language among other things...and I am also looking foreward to the weekend...
posted by
jimmy68
on January 10, 2005 at 8:34 PM
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Nicely done....I like the words prickly discoveries.
posted by
Julia.
on January 9, 2005 at 6:06 PM
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Temple...I didn't realize that Jimmy was sending me to this poem,
but since I am here...hello!
posted by
Original_Influence
on January 9, 2005 at 2:24 PM
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emotional icepicks - you always have great descriptions...
posted by
Ca88andra
on January 7, 2005 at 11:40 PM
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HG, I left you a comment....
But, I'll say this here, our growth comes from finding ways to knock holes in our own walls. It feels really fucking good. Not just good,
fucking good. :) Here, borrow my sledge hammer.
posted by
Temple
on January 7, 2005 at 10:57 PM
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Original
I'm happy it captured that for you. Sometimes I'm lucky and it works that way. Hope things are good with you.
posted by
Temple
on January 7, 2005 at 10:56 PM
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leave it to the sociology major to get regentrification from this poem....
and it usually doesn't work out so nicely, love....people who live there are forced out by high rent and property prices if there isn't enough low and middle income housing....hmmm....not where this was going at all....
it's a process, not crisp and new, but therein is the lesson as we talked about tonight...in that sparkly little crack we find as we throw that motherfucker against the wall and re-examine :)
posted by
Temple
on January 7, 2005 at 10:54 PM
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I am a stone cold brick wall, and I see no one knocking it down... Great poem.
posted by
Holy_Grail
on January 7, 2005 at 9:38 PM
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Temple,
This is so beautiful...it captures the feelings and experience so clearly. Many thanks.
posted by
Original_Influence
on January 7, 2005 at 9:57 AM
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Urban renewal is always messy...
and painful for those
whose homes get bulldozed
but when the dust clears
the neighborhood is much improved
with parkland
and clean streets
everything crisp and new
under the sun...
posted by
jimmy68
on January 7, 2005 at 8:24 AM
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