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Thats funny
I thought lines 3 & 4 were like to personal or something and that would make people uncomfortable. Shows you how much I know. Thanks for reading and commenting, to all. Oh yeah, I'm not like real religious or anything, I just decided to read the bible for the first time, and in Genesis it tells how God made a mistake with man and had to start over, ie. Noah and the flood. This, relating to me, is kind of what the poem is about.
Peace
posted by
crag511
on November 17, 2004 at 9:12 AM
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a hearty amen
to lines 3,4. that was really beautiful!
posted by
wannabejew
on November 17, 2004 at 7:21 AM
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I make it my policy to check out the blogs of people who leave me comments. Usually I am not disappointed in the results. I like this poem. Especially lines 3 and 4.
posted by
Dyl_Pickle
on November 16, 2004 at 6:06 AM
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Crag~~~
I can see where your going with this :) 
posted by
ANGELZ_MIND
on November 16, 2004 at 3:08 AM
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