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this is the strongest poem I have read about war and the human condition... my heart goes out to you and all in that situation. I do not have the arms to bear it. ~Metta
posted by
Metta
on April 8, 2005 at 10:17 AM
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SlyCy, by no means is this a antiwar comment. This is just a moment in my life, something I lived.
posted by
michael_pilarte
on December 7, 2004 at 7:59 AM
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Virtually any comment about war is an anti-war comment.
posted by
SlyCy
on December 7, 2004 at 6:11 AM
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mike~~~
This poems gives us a look into how you felt during that time .. and I must say .. It is something to think over.
posted by
ANGELZ_MIND
on November 17, 2004 at 11:19 AM
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hey now
After reading your poem, I realized how petty my own problems and issues are. Thanks for helping me put things into perspective. My family and myself are praying for all of you.
Peace
posted by
crag511
on November 15, 2004 at 8:13 PM
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Beachbelle and Redlunar
Thanks, I am glad you enjoyed it. They were actual thougts which did cross my mind, about a year ago.
posted by
michael_pilarte
on November 14, 2004 at 2:19 AM
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I suspect that this sums ups what everyone in that situation thinks
at some time or other. Good work
posted by
beachbelle
on November 14, 2004 at 1:51 AM
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mike -- your poem really paints a picture...thanks for sharing! red
posted by
redlunar
on November 14, 2004 at 1:32 AM
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thanksbut what do you mean by very hauning?
posted by
michael_pilarte
on November 14, 2004 at 1:27 AM
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This is well written, but
very haunting. You don't get any more real then this.
posted by
Sherri_G
on November 13, 2004 at 2:42 PM
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I found it to be
very moving.
posted by
maybe
on November 13, 2004 at 2:36 PM
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