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Thanks Mia! I just posted the next part Witty, it gives you an idea of where it's going perhaps. =)
posted by
Unidentified_Hacker
on October 7, 2004 at 11:15 AM
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I mentioned your post to Melody Star
...so hopefully she'll be reading you soon.
posted by
MiaElla
on October 7, 2004 at 11:03 AM
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I'm just curious to know where it's heading!
posted by
Witty_Woman
on October 7, 2004 at 11:02 AM
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Thank you Mia
I'm glad that you are enjoying it, and I hope that you still enjoy it as the focus of the story changes. I'm just excited I have multiple readers! =P
posted by
Unidentified_Hacker
on October 7, 2004 at 10:59 AM
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This is really good.
I've been keeping up with the story and can't wait for what you have in store for us faint of heart...lol.
posted by
MiaElla
on October 7, 2004 at 6:20 AM
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Hahaha
Well good =) I'm gald to hear it
posted by
Unidentified_Hacker
on October 6, 2004 at 5:07 PM
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I think I can cope. As the plaque on my wall goes - "You can't scare me. I have children".
posted by
Witty_Woman
on October 6, 2004 at 5:03 PM
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Thanks Witty
It's nice to know that someone's reading =). I should tell you however that this is not so much a twist as the transition into the actual crux of the story. While up to this point it may be reminiscant of a horror story, it's actually very much not horror. I should also warn that this is about the time when things start to get graphic. On the little blog description I had said parts of the story may be disturbing to some, and what has been posted so far contains none of the disturbing parts. I would like to say though that what I describe is not simply trivial. If I were to take out the graphic parts of the story, you would simply not get the same satisfaction out of reading it. So, that is my warning. Probably beginning in two or three posts, things will start to get messy.
posted by
Unidentified_Hacker
on October 6, 2004 at 5:00 PM
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Interesting twist! I'm still reading, don't stop posting!
posted by
Witty_Woman
on October 6, 2004 at 10:26 AM
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