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                Glad you decided to carry on with this, I didn't want to stop after two parts and not know how it continued!  It reminds me of the Hallowe'en films.  
                
                    posted by
                    Witty_Woman
                     on October 1, 2004 at 4:02 AM
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                    I think you're an awesome writer!
                
                Then again, it's me talking...  So, you might want to take that with a grain of salt!  :)  But, I think you're writing and story telling ability are wonderful!  Keep it up!
                
                    posted by
                    RachelAnna
                     on September 30, 2004 at 10:21 PM
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                    Thank you
                
                I'm not the best writer, I suppose, but I really like to create the story. Sometimes getting it across in a manner that flows smoothly is a little tough for me. I'd rather tell the story. I'm looking forward to what you'll think of the latter parts of the story. My roommate lost sleep after hearing it, and my friend became physically cold to the point of needing a sweatshirt. =)
                
                    posted by
                    Unidentified_Hacker
                     on September 30, 2004 at 10:16 PM
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                    Awesome!
                
                Excellent writing, yet again!  Great job!  Glad you deciding to start posting to this again!  I've put it on my favorites!
                
                    posted by
                    RachelAnna
                     on September 30, 2004 at 9:51 PM
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