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thanks for the comment Whim - I've taken it on board and made some changes
posted by
robdon67
on September 22, 2004 at 4:07 PM
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Realistic. Easy to wonder how much is real and how much is fiction.
Watch your use of 'that'. You rely on it heavily in this segment.
posted by
Whim
on September 21, 2004 at 4:17 PM
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thanks ... shall see where this character goes
posted by
robdon67
on September 21, 2004 at 3:58 PM
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Wow. Very powerful to say the least.
posted by
Moohahaha
on September 20, 2004 at 11:39 PM
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