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MariVye
thank you
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 13, 2004 at 11:51 AM
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You are welcome - hang in there ~
posted by
MariVye
on September 13, 2004 at 11:49 AM
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MariVye
thank you very much for your kind advice...........I will remember that..............take care and thank you so much
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 13, 2004 at 11:23 AM
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I am so sorry about your brother. I cannot imagine that pain.
What you wrote for your brother is Beautiful.
My only advice is to: just be sure you share what is in YOUR heart - nothing less, nothing more. Be sure to not say what you think the others would want to hear - you will certainly regret that.
Good luck and may God be with you ~
posted by
MariVye
on September 13, 2004 at 11:20 AM
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mariantonia
thank you very much , I still feel it needs more work to it.but I will read it over again tomorrow.
thank you so muh for your encouragent and support..............for reading and commenting...........you are so kind, ........take care and thanks again
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 12, 2004 at 8:33 AM
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This is beautiful. Of course, this is your very own style of language with your "accent". I can't correct the grammer & such as it wouldn't be right as this is your personal version. All the important points are covered. Whatever else suggestions offered are up to you. You know best what will go down well with the rest of the families present. Prayers with you.
posted by
mariantonia
on September 12, 2004 at 5:41 AM
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hugz_n_kisses
thank you ever so much, hope you are ok..............take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 12, 2004 at 4:45 AM
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tbgroucho
not to late, I don't have to do it to next thursday.........thank you
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 12, 2004 at 4:45 AM
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tremacc
thank you so much you are very kind
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 12, 2004 at 4:44 AM
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SpitFire70
thank you very much, yes that will sound much better...thank you ever so very much...........you are wonderful, have a nice day, thanks for everything...........take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 12, 2004 at 4:43 AM
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your word are so beautil with wonderfful emotioons xoxlxoxoxoxoxox
posted by
hugz_n_kisses
on September 12, 2004 at 3:03 AM
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lovely, love
wish i could help polish it off but it's too late i think and i'm off abed.
tg
posted by
tbgroucho
on September 11, 2004 at 8:37 PM
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Symphony, what you have written is deeply moving. I am sure that everyone who knew Shayne will appreciate what you have written. Rest easy, you have served his memory well.
posted by
Tremac
on September 11, 2004 at 8:02 PM
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Symphony, it's beautiful and straight from the heart.
I think it's fine the way it is. If I could suggest just one tiny little thing, I'd say that after you "thank everyone for coming to celebrate the life of my brother." and then you go on to talking "to" your brother, address the group, then when talking to your brother, address him by name. Do the same toward the ending when you stop talking "to" your brother and begin again talking to the people. Like when you say, "Don't leave here today do not cry in saddness..." That may just give it a bit more direction. Just my 2 cents. I think the wording is really great. I'm so sorry about your loss. All my prayers will be with you, especially on Thursday. I hope you and your family get the closure you hope for.
posted by
SpitFire70
on September 11, 2004 at 4:51 PM
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RachelAnna
thank you I will
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 11, 2004 at 4:12 PM
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You should just put it away until tomorrow..
Then read it over and make changes if you still aren't satisfied.
posted by
RachelAnna
on September 11, 2004 at 4:08 PM
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RachelAnna
yes I have now changed it.....but somehow I am still not satisfied..........argh
maybe I should go back to bed and wait to read it in the morning, this is so hard, much harder than I originally thought..but I do feel a little better for have writing it
.thank you so much for helping me....you are wondeful
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 11, 2004 at 3:58 PM
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:)
Glad you like it. I know sometimes it's hard to find the perfect word. Hope that one works better for ya! :)
posted by
RachelAnna
on September 11, 2004 at 3:54 PM
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RachelAnna
yes brave............I like that thanks.....................I am going back to change that..............thank you ever so much, that word is perfect!!!!
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on September 11, 2004 at 3:52 PM
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Looks good...
Instead of macho... Hmm.... manly? Strong? Brave?
posted by
RachelAnna
on September 11, 2004 at 3:49 PM
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