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hey little ms!
Always glad to provide a fix for a poetry junkie. :)  I really like this one, too.  Thanks for the compliment.

posted by Temple on August 26, 2004 at 5:55 PM | link to this | reply

hey temple
just dropped in to get my latest poetry fix from you - I love the way you expressed yourself in this poem.

posted by littlemspickles on August 26, 2004 at 2:07 PM | link to this | reply

Sky! Haven't seen you in a while....
Then again, I've been gone a lot. :)  Nice to see you.

posted by Temple on August 25, 2004 at 4:42 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Melodystar. :)
Thanks for reading and commenting.

posted by Temple on August 25, 2004 at 4:41 PM | link to this | reply

HEY TEMPLE,

posted by Star5_ on August 25, 2004 at 4:28 PM | link to this | reply

Great Poem.

posted by Melodystar on August 25, 2004 at 3:42 PM | link to this | reply

So beautifully said and so true, teddy...
I think I will come back from time to time and read this one. 

posted by Temple on August 25, 2004 at 3:32 PM | link to this | reply

Sweet Temple,

go slowly but surely through all that matters, Dear Lady. Patience is, after all, a Temple.  

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 25, 2004 at 2:15 PM | link to this | reply

Oh Teddy!
Thank you so much.  I hope you can forgive me for neglecting you, I'm so behind.  I'm catching up though, and you are so sweet to comment here.  I'm glad you like it. 

posted by Temple on August 24, 2004 at 9:43 PM | link to this | reply

Hi, Temple...cool poem indeed...  -tp

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on August 24, 2004 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Cass, that's true, home means a lot of things.
Right now I just was surprised at how at home I feel here....that it took moving into this place for me to find that "I'm actually back in San Diego" moment.  My other apt was nice, better in some ways, but something about the new "beach house" as I call it (in downtown of course) just clicks.  Long, scary road to get here, but the universe knew all the time.

posted by Temple on August 22, 2004 at 1:06 PM | link to this | reply

jimmy, what can I say here that I haven't already been gushing about
in your comments section?  This was so sweet and means a lot.  Telling me that you like how I think, that's one of the best compliments ever.  Hugs to you. 

posted by Temple on August 22, 2004 at 1:03 PM | link to this | reply

well, kid cargo, you know more about the move now...
Which was not pleasant, but the end result is great.  I love my big green tree...no one can see in my windows because I'm on the third floor and all the other buildings are lower.  My big tree blocks it enough to make it private and so I can lay in bed at look out at these big green leaves and the sky.  It's so much nicer than the view of another building.  The kitties dig the view, too.  So much to see.  Funny how things work out.  :)

posted by Temple on August 22, 2004 at 1:02 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks Symphony...
I love different. :)

posted by Temple on August 22, 2004 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply

Great poem Temple. Home can mean so many things...

posted by Ca88andra on August 22, 2004 at 4:56 AM | link to this | reply

I like...

the way your mind flows

like jagged water

over cobblestones

under streetlights

in the alleys of the heart...

posted by jimmy68 on August 21, 2004 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

good poem. i like the green leaves
hope your move was pleasant.

posted by FreeManWalking on August 21, 2004 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

different
but great

posted by _Symphony_ on August 21, 2004 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply