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Interesting
Very interesting.  I don't have time to read the whole thing, but will definitely make a point of stopping back to finish it.  Thanks a bunch!! : )   ~ A. Winters ~

posted by A.Winters on August 16, 2004 at 8:40 PM | link to this | reply

This is fantastic. Good pace. Not sure if that's the end of your story. May be a few typos there. Interesting awakening of a woman hermaphrodite.

posted by mariantonia on August 4, 2004 at 7:29 PM | link to this | reply