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mia ella
this is not the purpose of your gifted poetry, but it has having the effect of making me quit calling myself a poet. you're so good. I can't even pick out a favorite line -- it's just uniformly terrific. you have a great gift for word arrangement and sound arrangement. tg
posted by
tbgroucho
on August 3, 2004 at 12:31 PM
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Very nice. I have been here in this poem at times...
posted by
Tremac
on August 3, 2004 at 8:57 AM
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Enjoyed the imagery.............................Conscience
posted by
Conscience
on August 2, 2004 at 8:32 PM
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Powerful and lovely MiaElla
Feels like being alone and lost within the massive, unbreathing crush of a big city. Very nice poem.
posted by
Katray2
on August 2, 2004 at 6:12 PM
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The images creates the imgination. Great Poem.
posted by
Melodystar
on August 2, 2004 at 4:51 PM
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MiaElla -
Very graphic and vivid. I got cold.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 2, 2004 at 3:21 PM
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