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MiaElla
Well I need to go take a cold shower now...
posted by
MizMax
on September 4, 2004 at 7:19 PM
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Straight to the point
I love it. For a moment though, I thought this was about me. Hehehe
posted by
Sherri_G
on July 21, 2004 at 8:18 AM
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wow!! This poem sizzles!
posted by
Tanoolicious
on June 30, 2004 at 3:44 PM
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Sue,
You make me smile...
a lot!
posted by
MiaElla
on June 30, 2004 at 12:55 PM
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it was so beautiful, came to read you again.....
posted by
Star5_
on June 30, 2004 at 12:45 PM
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Wonderful description form the back seat of a car!
posted by
Melodystar
on June 30, 2004 at 10:16 AM
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MiaElla
LOL!! I thought I spotted a woman of taste! I prefer to call the film "Three hours of Waiting for the ship to go down." I ruined the Indiglo function on my watch! tg
posted by
tbgroucho
on June 30, 2004 at 8:59 AM
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tbgroucho,
I hated Titanic. I wanted Jack to push her off that piece of debris so bad.
posted by
MiaElla
on June 30, 2004 at 8:56 AM
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nice
been watching Titanic? (Hope not!) A few less words perhaps, or less talk, more rock, as it were
tg
posted by
tbgroucho
on June 30, 2004 at 8:54 AM
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hi MiaElla--a poem drenched with prespiration and inspiration. love s.
posted by
scriber
on June 30, 2004 at 8:47 AM
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love it
and the last two lines somehow make me feel understood
posted by
marzieh
on June 30, 2004 at 7:36 AM
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Steamy glasses
sweat on brow, heavy breathing. You poets just never give us poor guys a break do you. Great and hot.
posted by
Moondawg
on June 29, 2004 at 8:02 PM
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Hmmm
Now that's a poem for New Orleans' Congo Square (and Annie Rice used to live 10 blocks downriver from my house; alas, she is selling that grand old dame of a mansion of hers).
posted by
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
on June 29, 2004 at 8:00 PM
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Really sexy stuff here.
If I were a boy, I'd be askin' for your digits! ;)
posted by
Temple
on June 29, 2004 at 4:26 PM
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wow
this was very very very good indeed......well done.................take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 29, 2004 at 10:58 AM
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Hot!!
Very Hot!
posted by
HarveyG
on June 29, 2004 at 9:41 AM
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beautiful............
posted by
Star5_
on June 29, 2004 at 8:25 AM
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Wow.
That was an amazing poem for such a cliche term. Back seat of a car, we've all been there or heard of it, you captured it very well.
posted by
BlushFussy
on June 29, 2004 at 6:57 AM
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