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somedays I feel that way too, then I scream until you all hear me.....

posted by Star5_ on June 19, 2004 at 11:11 PM | link to this | reply

absolutely true, Sue...just doesn't feel like that right now :)

posted by Temple on June 19, 2004 at 11:07 PM | link to this | reply

beauty of life could begin from anywhere............

posted by Star5_ on June 19, 2004 at 11:04 PM | link to this | reply

Sue, it's good to know that something beautiful can come from sad places.
Otherwise I imagine it would be much worse.  Thank you, as always, for reading.

posted by Temple on June 19, 2004 at 11:03 PM | link to this | reply

didn't you the waves kissed the shore.........beautiful poem.

posted by Star5_ on June 19, 2004 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply

little ms., thank you....yes, very sad indeed.

posted by Temple on June 19, 2004 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

temple
this is a fantastic poem - very sad though

posted by littlemspickles on June 19, 2004 at 3:21 AM | link to this | reply

so maybe you've been where I am Jimmy
lost at sea, the one life raft you thought would be there always has drifted off...and no, the ocean most certainly doesn't care about my struggle....funny you should mention sailors...the sailor in my story floated off safely leaving me behind

posted by Temple on June 19, 2004 at 12:54 AM | link to this | reply

Lost in the middle of nowhere...

no,

the Ocean doesn't care

if I drown

or broil

I am thirsty here

and cannot drink

I stare into the Sun

and pray

no one listens

Neptune is playing with his mermaids

unconcerned

by the death

of one more sailor...

posted by jimmy68 on June 18, 2004 at 11:54 PM | link to this | reply