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a subtle embrace of gritty truths...very good!
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on June 25, 2004 at 1:11 PM
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I really liked that one
keep up the great work...you have some incredible talent! 
posted by
David1Spirit
on June 25, 2004 at 12:57 PM
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you are very talented
well done..................take care
posted by
_Symphony_
on June 25, 2004 at 10:45 AM
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What an indictment.
You write a good poem. Your words are strong.
posted by
man-boy
on June 23, 2004 at 8:46 PM
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Some very negitive imagry here . . .
that is apparently what you were going for and you did it beautifully.
posted by
HarveyG
on June 21, 2004 at 8:05 PM
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nice .........very nice.
posted by
Star5_
on June 19, 2004 at 10:29 PM
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I love your voice. I can hear it in this poem.
You have a very narrative, poignant, commentative quality to your poetry. Thanks for writing.
posted by
Tremac
on June 18, 2004 at 12:00 PM
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That's so creative!
I don't know why you don't have more comments on here. I love it!
posted by
lackadaisial
on June 18, 2004 at 9:47 AM
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hi..............
posted by
Star5_
on June 17, 2004 at 8:33 AM
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