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faranya, thank you!
I knew you were a teacher when I read your comment. :) I love the critique. It's rare to get those around here. Thanks for reading and commenting.
posted by
Temple
on June 4, 2004 at 9:28 PM
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Effective use of the repetive "pacing across the blacktop" idea, as if it is really an endless road. If it leads to hearth and home, then the journey is well taken. Good metaphor for ramblings of the soul as well as the body.
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faranya
on June 4, 2004 at 8:08 PM
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