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Wenchie
"lovely warm intimacy" I love that. Thanks so much. :)
posted by
Temple
on May 4, 2004 at 2:37 AM
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Mmmmm, "breathing is closer now" ...
lovely, warm intimacy; pulling the reader into your poem, just as your heart is pulled into his 
xxx
posted by
Moohahaha
on May 4, 2004 at 12:10 AM
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I had the ring before him
So it's just my piss-poor luck. I loved that ring. And the Celtic band was innnocent! 
posted by
Holy_Grail
on May 3, 2004 at 7:59 PM
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I'm sorry
Maybe it's a sign from the universe? Telling you.....
posted by
Temple
on May 3, 2004 at 7:36 PM
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Yep, that was me
And I am very upset because I lost that ring and my favorite Celtic band!
posted by
Holy_Grail
on May 3, 2004 at 7:28 PM
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awww, wait....I remember, the calladah ring, right?
You get to own your feelings for him, whether he was ever officially yours. :)
posted by
Temple
on May 3, 2004 at 7:24 PM
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Well in my case he's gone for good. And was never really mine to begin with. Still I miss him and have for a long time...
posted by
Holy_Grail
on May 3, 2004 at 7:03 PM
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Well, bridg, I think you and me will become very close
over the next 6 months. I imagine much more of this here or in my journal blog to come. I miss him so much at night. Last night I just realized that he was only two states away....finally back in my country. I'm constantly writing, scribbling on something.
posted by
Temple
on May 3, 2004 at 6:59 PM
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Boy do I....
And that is sometimes when we do our best writing. Odd times when we're not trying.
posted by
Holy_Grail
on May 3, 2004 at 6:49 PM
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bridgetjm
You feel my pain, then, yes? I'm glad you liked it. I never know if these are good....they come to be at 3:00 in the dark...scribbled on bedside whatever. :)
posted by
Temple
on May 3, 2004 at 6:46 PM
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Ouch
struck a chord, struck a chord!!!!!!!!!! Although it's more like 5 or 6 state away....
Nice poem
posted by
Holy_Grail
on May 3, 2004 at 6:24 PM
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Absolutely.
How is it possible to feel him with me, all the time, and feel the absence of him at the same time? I wish he wasn't so.....John Wayne. But, whatever's he's gotta do to get through it, I'll support.
posted by
Temple
on May 3, 2004 at 6:21 PM
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seems pretty warm (ie hot) to me. You can feel him here, can't you?
posted by
beedle
on May 3, 2004 at 5:35 PM
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Aardvark, thanks for stopping by.
posted by
Temple
on May 3, 2004 at 5:06 PM
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Nice emotive language. A bit tepid though.
posted by
aardvark
on May 3, 2004 at 3:50 PM
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