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The vocabulary absorbs some impact of the anger. I'm not sure who's to blame. The accused, the accuser all seem to have a hand.....
posted by
mariantonia
on September 22, 2004 at 6:06 PM
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Yeah, I must be stupid 'cause I did not understand your post. Lots of big words. But I know there is a theme in there somewhere.
However, I did not agree with your comment on my blog entitled I AM TAKING MY COUNTRY BACK.
You seem so intelligent, but your comment about Islam seems so shortsighted. Can you explain your duality?
posted by
HeNateMe
on May 7, 2004 at 10:26 AM
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Thank you Ed for saying what I couldn't find the words to express. I guess that's why they pay you big bucks! Attak write more please. We'll be watching for your work.
posted by
Kay-Ren
on April 29, 2004 at 5:38 PM
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Editormum - I loved your comment and I much agree.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 29, 2004 at 9:40 AM
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My Gawd...It's an Explosion
from my vocabulary textbooks. Dude, I think I like what you are trying to say, but please, make your font and your word choice smaller.
A nice 12 or 14 point font (sizes 3 and 4 in the drop down box) will make your blog far easier to read and will give you a better line length. A few paragraphs wouldn't be amiss, either.
You're writing on about the 18th grade level. Drop back a bit for us slow folks, please. Most of us can handle 8th to 12th grade levels without suffering brain implosion. Shorter words, fewer parenthetical thoughts, less complicated sentences. It's not that we're dumb, it's just that grad-school level writing isn't best suited for a blog.
I think you have a good message, but until it's easier to read, I can't really be certain.
posted by
editormum
on April 29, 2004 at 9:28 AM
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