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Thanks for your kind comment!

 

posted by Celeste632 on April 19, 2004 at 5:50 AM | link to this | reply

hi celeste
I've been reading through your poetry and wanted to let you know that you had a visitor!

It's an interesting collection with different subjects and styles, but all reflective and personal.

This one drew me in more than the other poems with a feeling of 'connectedness' with the players in the poem.

Keep up the great work!

posted by littlemspickles on April 19, 2004 at 5:07 AM | link to this | reply

Parsifal---thank you!

 

posted by Celeste632 on April 5, 2004 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

Celeste632:

Very smooth imagery,

( for a tough subject )

& fine "sprung rhythm,"

especially the last stanza.

Parsifal. 

posted by parsifal on April 5, 2004 at 2:11 PM | link to this | reply

Simple
Made me think ,god bless your friend

posted by hticklebug on April 5, 2004 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you....

posted by Celeste632 on April 5, 2004 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

This is very touching...

posted by Chaltuu on April 5, 2004 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply