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It's funny I wrote this poem many years ago, about 25 at least.  I really don't like it much, think its weak but I like the castle metaphor anyway.   Someday I want to improve it, but thanks,

John, You are too precious.

posted by poetjpb on March 18, 2004 at 6:09 PM | link to this | reply

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Sir John here, loved your castle, was it built for me and my rusty armour, sigh

posted by WileyJohn on March 18, 2004 at 9:47 AM | link to this | reply