Vivi's Poetry

Hi fellow poets, I am currently ranked as a finalist in a poetry contest. Please be so kind as to rate my poem. Any comments would be welcome. Thank you. Go here to vote: http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?PID=12919183 Sign in to see full entry.

Love's Paradox I've pricked my hands on thorns of fate, Clinging to a vow, With dire hopes that in the bleeding Love might save somehow. How can the heart withstand such Refining at His tweak, When dropping like an angry stone Ravaged by the creek? Shall I protest in jaggedness The hand that hews my... Sign in to see full entry.

FOR BERNARD (In dedication to my fine African) How rare, how brilliant you are; an onyx star, In your presence I perpetually fall through the sky, Scorching in adoration. In your vastity, my feet find no impact, Falling into your eyes on knees in molten torrents, At your most ardent core, There... Sign in to see full entry.