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Re: Annicita

Thank you, Annie. It should read:


I kept my gaze on Judy, but out of the corner of my eye, I could see Steve take control of the ring that the boy had brought on a red velvet pillow. 

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I haven't had time to slide that "no table of contents" thing down for the PublishDrive version, so I'll be able to fix it there.
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posted by BigV on June 26, 2023 at 7:19 PM | link to this | reply

of the ring that had brought? of the ring that had been brought?

posted by Annicita on June 26, 2023 at 6:22 PM | link to this | reply

this is just beautiful.

posted by Amanda__ on May 21, 2023 at 9:42 AM | link to this | reply