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posted by
Annicita
on October 20, 2022 at 5:34 AM
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This one calls for a big Wow
This is truly a glimpse of poet in the finest of her modes, quite like an accomplished poet. I enjoyed it so much that I read it over and over again. EXCELLENT !!!
posted by
anib
on October 17, 2022 at 6:51 AM
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A joy to read. It brought me back to my own days spent on the beach as a teenager. Thanks for this sweet memory!
posted by
adnohr
on August 21, 2022 at 1:51 PM
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Well of course I can feel your toes in the sand, the beat of your heart. I suppose that is what a good poem does.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 21, 2022 at 7:52 AM
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Re: Re: Hi Aba brother,
I have made the same comment here to both you and Kabu. It intrigues me.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 21, 2022 at 12:21 AM
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Re: Good Afternoon
Thank you. It needs sone more work, I think. I may split it into two different poems.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 21, 2022 at 12:15 AM
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Re: Good morning - Thank you.
Well, I kinda sat there like a silly Gidget and he was intent on whatever was on his mind so everyone seemed invisible to him I think as he walked past us. Still now I remember the day. The poem isn't right yet. Maybe one day...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 21, 2022 at 12:14 AM
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Re: Kabu
And why was she an Angel?
I think I met one once. She didn't look like a stereotypical Angel. She most likely saved the lives of myself and my daughters though. i posted the story here once.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 21, 2022 at 12:07 AM
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Re: Hi Sis,
And why was she an Angel?
I think I met one once. She didn't look like a stereotypical Angel. She most likely saved the lives of myself and my daughters though.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 21, 2022 at 12:07 AM
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Re: Hi Sis,
Oh, thank you, dear brother. No, I didn't write it as a teen. It happened when I was a teen. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on August 20, 2022 at 11:24 PM
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Hi Sis,
Truly fantastic ! The angel Kabu talks about was an angel for all Blogit members, Wendy Chevraunt. Abosolutely incredible considering you wrote it as a teenager. 
posted by
anib
on August 20, 2022 at 9:45 PM
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loved this of course. My cousin and I met an angel once. Wendy is gone many years now and I always pray she is with the angel who saved the day for us both.
posted by
Kabu
on August 20, 2022 at 3:18 PM
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Good Afternoon
Sea Gypsy, this is very nice as always!
posted by
Goldiec
on August 20, 2022 at 1:08 PM
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Those memories will be with us forever.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 20, 2022 at 10:55 AM
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Good morning
This is a beautiful beach scene between two people. Your choice of words never fail to amaze me.
posted by
Sherri_G
on August 20, 2022 at 5:56 AM
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I felt this in my soul . Times past forever tattooed upon it .
posted by
WaterKat
on August 20, 2022 at 5:13 AM
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