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posted by Annicita on October 20, 2022 at 5:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Thank you so much. It is a bit better this round than it was but they can all use improvement. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 18, 2022 at 12:26 AM | link to this | reply

Sounds really professional you must be pleased with it .

posted by C_C_T on August 17, 2022 at 11:09 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Good Morning

Thank you, Goldie. Glad that it was pleasing to you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 16, 2022 at 4:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Good morning

Thank you, Sherri! Yes, Autumn has great colors. Glad you enjoyed this.

The title is so named because in painting watercolors the depth of color increases by degrees, and it can becone more intense as it progresses. Like the poem. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 16, 2022 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Dear Sis,

Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed this on. Adding Socrates was fun. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 16, 2022 at 4:49 PM | link to this | reply

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So many do float around in there! Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 16, 2022 at 4:47 PM | link to this | reply

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Kabu dear, Thank you do much! Hugs back at ch'ya! I'm very glad your enjoyed reading it. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 16, 2022 at 4:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS - Thank you

I think you are extremely cogent! It's not always easy to comment, I know. I appreciate it so much. Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 16, 2022 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

I read this earlier today and loved it and forgot to comment I guess.  That's awful of me.  I dislike being confused.  LOL

posted by TAPS. on August 16, 2022 at 3:28 PM | link to this | reply

You take my breath away with the beauty of your poems. HUGS

posted by Kabu on August 16, 2022 at 1:07 PM | link to this | reply

The person stays in our memories.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 16, 2022 at 11:03 AM | link to this | reply

Dear Sis,

 A good one ! I liked the Socrates allusion 

posted by anib on August 16, 2022 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

Dear Sis,

 A good one ! I liked the Socrates allusion 

posted by anib on August 16, 2022 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

Good morning

This is a really lovely work. I love all of the colors that Autumn gives to us.

posted by Sherri_G on August 16, 2022 at 5:29 AM | link to this | reply

Good Morning

Sea Gypsy, this is beautiful!

posted by Goldiec on August 16, 2022 at 12:31 AM | link to this | reply