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posted by Kabu on August 30, 2017 at 4:48 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Oh, bingo, Naut! So true. The sound of silence. Not only that, but silence is often the case with responses to pain and grief; hence the genesis of this poem. Silence, and a presence perhaps; a hug. Those things I remember when I lost each parent. 'Lost,' an odd word choice, like I could find them... Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 29, 2017 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

RP

There is pain and grief that cannot be adequarely expressed in words - there can only be silence...

posted by Nautikos on August 29, 2017 at 5:20 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Kabu

Thanks, Kabu. It is challenging at times but you are right. I appreciate that. xoxoxo

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 29, 2017 at 2:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Kabu

breaking out from one's norm is such good therapy and wow it worked as well.xoxoxo

posted by Kabu on August 29, 2017 at 9:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: TAPS

Oh, dear TAPS, my heart is breaking for you and your family. Such devastmating pain leaves one in shock and wordless. When tragedy strikes, it seems we are tested to our limits. I pray for peace and strength for you and your family. So very sorry. Not again. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 29, 2017 at 12:41 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: TAPS

I'm afraid that I get to go through that again.  See my latest post:  Go to Does Jesus Care?

posted by TAPS. on August 28, 2017 at 11:56 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, Lanetay. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 28, 2017 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you, Annicita.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 28, 2017 at 4:19 PM | link to this | reply

I know the feeling of alone and the feeling of desire

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

posted by Lanetay on August 28, 2017 at 3:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

It's wonderful that you have your background experience, being a grief counselor is difficult. I do have several friends who are grief counselors. Please understand, this is not about me personally. This was written after watching people being interviewed on TV one particular evening when there were multiple shooting incidents in the Los Angeles area, and they all touched me at that moment. Thank you, Bill. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 28, 2017 at 12:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: BC

I'm sorry you have known this deepest pain. I think none of us get out of life without experiencing it, to some degree at least. I hope things are better now for you, or are on the way to being better. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 28, 2017 at 12:16 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Thank you, dear Kabu. It touched me at that moment, though not my usual style. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 28, 2017 at 12:14 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you, C_C_T. I appreciate your comments, and it was difficult for those folks, I am certain. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 28, 2017 at 12:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

It did seem awful; it appeared so. Thank you. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 28, 2017 at 12:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Dear Ab

What a horrid incident to have happened, and a tragedy. It must have been awful to watch, li'l bro, and I'm sorry it affected you so deeply. That is a coincidence, indeed, about posting poems after viewing television. I will visit your post and your poem soon. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 28, 2017 at 12:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

I am sorry for your pain, TAPS. I'm glad you have come through it to the point of remembering the good times and the love. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on August 28, 2017 at 12:09 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

diamond dry, excellent. Once, having been pre-theological, and am listed in alumni directory of the Lutheran denomination's alumni book, transferring to the colleges where i earned degrees and certificates. Can provide more information. Anyhow, I've always been interested in grief, and experienced it plenty of times love.

posted by BC-A on August 28, 2017 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Annicita on August 27, 2017 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply

Oh I know this one well... I feel weirdly honored to have known it so well.

posted by -blackcat on August 27, 2017 at 5:24 PM | link to this | reply

dearest S sister such a good job with such heart rending pain.

posted by Kabu on August 27, 2017 at 4:59 PM | link to this | reply

A difficult subject ,you have dealt with it wisely.

posted by C_C_T on August 27, 2017 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

I cannot imagine the pain that of which they have felt and are feeling. You describe it well.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 27, 2017 at 8:05 AM | link to this | reply

Dear Presta sis

What coincidence, sis Presta. We are on the same page. Three days ago the head of a so-called religious outfit in Haryana state, was given the verdict by the high court judges that its leader, Ram Rahim, was indeed the rapist of two sadhwis, female followers in his ashram, in 2002.  A hundred thousand of his followers ransacked vehicles, burnt govt. buildings, maimed and in the melee killed thirty innocent people, injuring 500 others.  It was a gruesome sight on the TV of complete mayhem in Panchkula. I was so grief-stricken that this poem was the result.

posted by anib on August 27, 2017 at 12:17 AM | link to this | reply

I have experienced that grief.  Though it never goes away, the pain eventually is tempered with wonderful memories and never ending love.

posted by TAPS. on August 26, 2017 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply