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Re: -blackcat

Hi, BC! It could be about almost anyone! It's not about me because it didon't happen to me. But to answer your question, I'm a writer, and writers write, while dreamers dream... Another poem, another day, another version, perhaps, will be about me. :)

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 4, 2017 at 12:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

Yes, you did with Kabu! :)

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 4, 2017 at 12:17 AM | link to this | reply

too bad it's not about you... and why isn't it? :)

posted by -blackcat on June 3, 2017 at 7:44 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Discovered love

posted by WileyJohn on June 3, 2017 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply

Re: kasperhoe

Thank you, kasper. You know, I agree, it could definitely be a dark tale.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 3, 2017 at 5:59 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

I like this one. It's a bit dark at the ending, but also romantic. Guess it could be great inspiration for a dark tale perhaps. 😊

posted by kasperhoe on June 3, 2017 at 1:30 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Re: Dear wonderful sis,

Yes, there are. This south India is way off from our north. The culture, language, landscape, height and built, facecuts etc. are all different. So I will pick up whatever I can from here. The day after we are going on a hilltstation resort Chikmaglur, land of coffee, where the temperatures are a great relief from that of our deserts. We are three families enjoying this season. Your twin grandsons going to the sea with sharks around worry me.

posted by anib on June 3, 2017 at 7:22 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Dear wonderful sis,

Wow! It's got some beautiful tourist sites. But no doubt you will relax and have good food and company. Enjoy!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 3, 2017 at 12:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Dear wonderful sis,

Ha hah! Yes, indeedy! I said this particular poem was not me... Poets can't lie. The works and words will read false, as you know. lol. Safe travels, Aba brother, and enjoy your vacation! We have sharks here like never before! Worrisome since my grandson twins surf daily and love the water. We all love the water.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 3, 2017 at 12:34 AM | link to this | reply

Dear wonderful sis,

You amaze me by the use of most appropriate words to express your feelings which appear as if they are your own experiences and then tell us it's not you, ha ha we know, we know, Lol ~ and ya. I'm touched. I am travelling now to my sis at Bangalore to enjoy summer vacations

posted by anib on June 2, 2017 at 11:43 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

Awwh, thank you so much, Wiley! I really appreciate that.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 2, 2017 at 7:03 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

You are right. Didn't realize that, I should just have a general running disclaimer... lol. Now I'm laughing

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 2, 2017 at 6:45 PM | link to this | reply

you crack me up every time you make sure everyone knows it isn't about you

posted by Annicita on June 2, 2017 at 5:51 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

The softly touching lips brought their spirits alive love.

posted by WileyJohn on June 2, 2017 at 2:14 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Thanks, FSI.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 2, 2017 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Lanetay

You always make me laugh, Lanetay! Thank you.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 2, 2017 at 10:37 AM | link to this | reply

The last line really strikes me.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 2, 2017 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

sounds like a day dream I have often

posted by Lanetay on June 2, 2017 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thanks, CC. This one is not about me. The Gypsy soul could write a little differentlly, you are correct.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 2, 2017 at 9:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re:Nautikos

Thanks, Naut! A lot of my stuff is rather out there...

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 2, 2017 at 9:30 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Then this can be for you and Wiley in celebration of your love. It's not about me, S. Sister. Love you, too.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 2, 2017 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

Well written RP. your trance like vision is quite erotic, well as far as a demure lady would admit, I feel the gypsy in your soul would like to whisper more.

posted by C_C_T on June 2, 2017 at 9:27 AM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

Thank you, TAPS.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 2, 2017 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

Re: chuck_ibrahim

Thank you so much, Chuck.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on June 2, 2017 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply

RP

Yery touching! An intimation of resurrection...

posted by Nautikos on June 2, 2017 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply

I know that. It is how it was when I met Wiley for the first time and his wife Joyce who had died, smiled. She had been set free. I love you dear S. Sister.