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Re: Annicita
Many thanks for the read Anni
posted by
anib
on June 2, 2017 at 7:24 PM
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lovely
posted by
Annicita
on May 31, 2017 at 3:54 PM
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Re: Anib
Thanks GM. I must admit that that vague jealousy was indeed there 
posted by
anib
on May 31, 2017 at 5:42 AM
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Anib
Your wordcraft is amazing, you are a wizard of words, but as to the meaning of the poem, I have no idea, other than a vague jealousy of your woman not paying full attention to you??? Cheers 
posted by
GoldenMean
on May 31, 2017 at 1:01 AM
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Re: Kabu
posted by
anib
on May 30, 2017 at 9:29 PM
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I seem to have done wonders, everyone has such high praise for my poetic 'skills', of which I am myself not so sure. But I do take your 'beautiful mind' and 'speechless' in utter humility. 
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anib
on May 30, 2017 at 9:29 PM
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Re: Re: Justi
Prose
posted by
anib
on May 30, 2017 at 9:24 PM
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Re: Justi
i only write poetry when there is not much going on in my brain on pross, and that you consider it as excellent, gives me immense happiness. Thank you.
posted by
anib
on May 30, 2017 at 9:23 PM
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Re: C C T
Did I? She was indeed, at one time, my object of love and now I can't even show her
posted by
anib
on May 30, 2017 at 9:21 PM
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Re: Aba Brother
Oh my biggie sis, Yiu saying so means a lot to me. Poetry for me does not come so naturally as yours. 'Scrumptious', wow! So delicious as to be eaten! Yes, I will title them in the future. 
posted by
anib
on May 30, 2017 at 9:18 PM
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Re: FSI
Oh, thank you so much FSI
posted by
anib
on May 30, 2017 at 9:10 PM
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Re: TAPS
Many thanks that you consider my poem great .
posted by
anib
on May 30, 2017 at 9:09 PM
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I am amazed that there can be such a beautiful mind here on blogit such as yours that I am privileged to read and communicate with. Your work here leaves me speechless with it's beauty and Romance.
posted by
Kabu
on May 30, 2017 at 7:49 PM
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This is excellent work and a beautiful poem.
posted by
Justi
on May 30, 2017 at 2:47 PM
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Very sweet you managed to write with the essence of your love .
posted by
C_C_T
on May 30, 2017 at 11:39 AM
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Aba Brother
This poem is just beautifully and scrumptuously written. It is so tastefully done and very touching. I love the last line. Well done, brother Aba. You should consider noting at the subject heading of your post, the word 'Poem' before the title so people will see what it is you've written. The similarity of themes is startling! Kudos and stars for this one! s
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on May 30, 2017 at 10:42 AM
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You truly have a way with words.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 30, 2017 at 9:08 AM
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Well done. Great poem.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 30, 2017 at 8:52 AM
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