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Oh it's just starting!

posted by Annicita on January 10, 2017 at 8:49 PM | link to this | reply

Feels like the calm before the storm even though it was a whirlwind! sam 

posted by sam444 on January 9, 2017 at 9:36 PM | link to this | reply

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maybe....possibly....probably

posted by Annicita on January 9, 2017 at 9:55 AM | link to this | reply

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thanks FSI...I prefer writing in the present tense

posted by Annicita on January 9, 2017 at 9:54 AM | link to this | reply

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i've almost 7 years!

posted by Annicita on January 9, 2017 at 9:52 AM | link to this | reply

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stay tuned....night you will know

posted by Annicita on January 9, 2017 at 9:51 AM | link to this | reply

I'll guess he is pulling out his pocket watch. Though one never can tell.

posted by C_C_T on January 9, 2017 at 9:25 AM | link to this | reply

makes me glad to be retired.

posted by Kabu on January 9, 2017 at 9:11 AM | link to this | reply

I like how you are using the present tense for this. It makes it feel to the reader that it is happening right now.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 9, 2017 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply

Sounds like something bad is about to happen to the chopper! Or someone. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 8, 2017 at 9:45 PM | link to this | reply