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Re: hi shamaji

Kabu has said it all. It's beautiful, exce!!ent 

posted by anib on January 10, 2017 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

that's it I want to fall off a Cliff sometime...metaphorically anyway. it reads like a beautiful thing to do, with one's mind.

posted by Kabu on January 8, 2017 at 4:28 PM | link to this | reply

Great poem and I loved the perspective, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on January 8, 2017 at 2:49 PM | link to this | reply

One day I hope to parachute....I wonder if it is the same feeling

posted by Annicita on January 8, 2017 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

There is something liberating about that.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 8, 2017 at 9:22 AM | link to this | reply

Interesting poem 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on January 8, 2017 at 7:25 AM | link to this | reply

shamasare

Well S. I am glad that you did it first. It must be magic or you would not be here to tell.

The only cliff I have fallen off was more of an abyss thankfully I was caught by many small hands and brought back to a different reality. Lovely poem though.

posted by C_C_T on January 8, 2017 at 6:56 AM | link to this | reply

I agree with RPresta.....even though i have only done that in my dreams.

posted by TAPS. on January 7, 2017 at 9:56 PM | link to this | reply

shamasehar

And your beautiful poem is magic, too! Just so ethereal. Love it! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 7, 2017 at 9:35 PM | link to this | reply

shamasehar

And your beautiful poem is magic, too! Just so ethereal. Love it! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on January 7, 2017 at 9:25 PM | link to this | reply