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Re: shobana
Thank you, shobana. It's quite an old one, and reworked greatly from the original. The original version was about her eyes. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on November 9, 2016 at 10:49 AM
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How romantic - I think its love sublime.
posted by
shobana
on November 4, 2016 at 4:28 AM
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Re: Re: Re: C_C_T
I see. And yes, I know not to believe everyting guys tell me, but...
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 29, 2016 at 4:26 PM
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Beautiful
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 29, 2016 at 7:24 AM
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Re: Re: C_C_T RPresta
I had other commitments RP. I suppose I did not want to lead anyone on. Or I felt it was not possible. Well you cannot feel like a poetess all the time, I know that you know not to believe every thing guys try to tell you.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 29, 2016 at 6:32 AM
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Re: BC-A
You make me smile, and for that alone, I thank you. Just words, that's all. 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 28, 2016 at 8:03 PM
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Re: WileyJohn
Thank you, Wiley, I shall try.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 28, 2016 at 8:01 PM
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Re: Katray2
I am glad you found it to be so, as I tend to write that way without realizing it. And this is one that was completely reworked. Thank you, Katray2.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 28, 2016 at 8:00 PM
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Re: Annicita
One does what one can, I guess. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 28, 2016 at 7:58 PM
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Re: FSI
Yes, FSI, some of us are that way, emotions tend to rule, though intellectually one may be able to compensate. Thank you.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 28, 2016 at 7:57 PM
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Re: Riversidepoet
Thank you, Riversidepoet, and I shall march until I drop! You ae welcome, and God bless you, too!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 28, 2016 at 7:55 PM
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Re: Kabu
Thank you Kabu. The vault is verbally barren, I think. I reworked this until is was a bit presentable. I thank you for your kindness, always.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 28, 2016 at 7:54 PM
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Re: C_C_T
It was a quick grab, CC! And it was a different poem from the one that I hastily reworked, told from a different POV. Today I feel like no poetess, so thank you very much. Glad you liked it. Yes, some guys do stare at the eyes, not many look away though... Why did you? 
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 28, 2016 at 7:52 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Aba
I reworked it. I am afraid I hold no treasures; no verbal treasures, though it would be nice. But I thank you for your kindness.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 28, 2016 at 7:48 PM
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Hot words love.
posted by
BC-A
on October 28, 2016 at 5:33 PM
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pouring forth the love!!!!
posted by
Annicita
on October 28, 2016 at 3:38 PM
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RPresta
Full of love, bring it on more love.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 28, 2016 at 12:58 PM
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Beautiful and romantic, RPresta!
posted by
Katray2
on October 28, 2016 at 9:40 AM
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One can feel that the emotions keep on going.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 28, 2016 at 9:36 AM
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a fire burning in my soul, keep it burning, march on soldier, thanks for sharing, may God bless
posted by
Riversidepoet
on October 28, 2016 at 7:05 AM
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if this is a taste of what is in the Vault please keep dipping dear
posted by
Kabu
on October 28, 2016 at 6:56 AM
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I think it would have been a hard job to resist that pull RP, I used to try not to look when eyes took on that hypnotic glare. Not that I felt unaware of the power. So I can feel empathy with this one. You should have a little dig into the Vault now you are a poetess. We love humans on here.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 28, 2016 at 6:42 AM
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Re: Re: Aba
I have also heard that vaults contain treasures. So it must be. 
posted by
anib
on October 28, 2016 at 12:53 AM
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Re: Aba
Thanks much, dear Aba. So kind of you. It's one I pulled out of the vault, as they say.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on October 27, 2016 at 10:58 PM
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Sweet yearnings do good for the soul, Presta dear.
posted by
anib
on October 27, 2016 at 9:45 PM
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