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Re: UKUSA

Thank you. Perhaps later today I can post something. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 19, 2016 at 10:45 AM | link to this | reply

I clicked before I left ...to see anything I had missed U have been talking

with Bligit villagers, but no posts in two days, that's so generous). Anyways, glad u are in this village, along with people I need to share thoughts&hopes with ...shalom

posted by NocrossJustchristmas on October 19, 2016 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

Depends on your upbringing. Indeed, they can and do. Thank you, Bill.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 18, 2016 at 9:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

Thank you, Annicita! I appreciate your taking time to read and comment. Words are in the eye of the beholder, 'eh? :) 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 18, 2016 at 9:46 PM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS and Nautikos

Bingo to both of you! It was supposed to do that. I have a follow-up poem that is almost finished I may get to post soon. Thank you very much. Oh, BTW, I do have a favorite cup for drinking coffee that has an image of a medieval tapestry on it. Has nothing to do with the poem though. One for each of you! LOL! I'm just a medieval kinda of lady, I guess. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 18, 2016 at 9:44 PM | link to this | reply

Intensities of the past haunt the present.

posted by BC-A on October 18, 2016 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply

Wonderful imagery that evokes different scenarios to several people here.  Well done!

posted by Annicita on October 18, 2016 at 3:45 PM | link to this | reply

I can see why Nautikos said what he did.  There is just something about this poem that speaks of ages past and many memories.

posted by TAPS. on October 18, 2016 at 3:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Katray2.

Well, thank you, Katray2! Yes, fear, the unknown, many things, can do that, as well as hate. I appreciate your comments. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 18, 2016 at 3:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: UKUSA

For that, dear UKUSA, I do thank you very much. What a beautiful way to express your thoughts. I appreciate what you say. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 18, 2016 at 3:37 PM | link to this | reply

Fantastically done, RPresta..

Speaks to me of hating what it is feared, the barely seen and unknown that can tease and taunt our imaginations. Great writing and timely for the season..

posted by Katray2 on October 18, 2016 at 6:44 AM | link to this | reply

RP, brava. A tour de force.Apparent to me is your zeal, a' la determination

to make this form a holy vehicle to communicate all the energies and force of what living beings feel and do. Thanks for your dedication to your chosen craft. shalom, shalom & amen. (Jesus, too, wants us to be sincere in our vocations w "talent.")

posted by NocrossJustchristmas on October 18, 2016 at 3:26 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

Thank you. Now that's an interesting and different comment! 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 17, 2016 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

RP

Very well done! For some reason it reminds me of medieval tapestry...

posted by Nautikos on October 17, 2016 at 9:41 PM | link to this | reply

Re: WileyJohn

Yes, I suppose they do. That's why they remain, perhaps. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 17, 2016 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Lanetay

You are correct, I am sure. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 17, 2016 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Oh, thank you, that's so very sweet of you. Perhaps a sisterhood of today's women DO hear the cries of the past, and sorrow for them. Yes, once upon a time, women had it worse than now... Thank you for hearing that part. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 17, 2016 at 8:54 PM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you. Yes, one wonders... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 17, 2016 at 8:51 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FSI

Vivid, is it? LOL. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 17, 2016 at 8:50 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Riversidepoet

Thank you. God bless you, too.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 17, 2016 at 8:49 PM | link to this | reply

Re: shobana

I appreciate that. Thank you, shobana. 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 17, 2016 at 8:48 PM | link to this | reply

RPresta

Ancient truths spring from the heart, lovely

posted by WileyJohn on October 17, 2016 at 5:28 PM | link to this | reply

to me its love, hate intertwined

posted by Lanetay on October 17, 2016 at 9:40 AM | link to this | reply

I may be right off base here but to me it is a cry of Womanhood, for freedom from the drearyness of living second class citizen lives.  A cry for freedom to be ourselves and not what someone else demands that we be.

seeing all of this in your words I just love it and you. The cry of women from past to present.

posted by Kabu on October 17, 2016 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

I suppose there is a certain part of us that wonders. An interesting poem RP.

Things a lot of us have forgotten. Well done.  

posted by C_C_T on October 17, 2016 at 9:13 AM | link to this | reply

Each line with its imagery jumps out at me.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 17, 2016 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

Ah , love has a never ending appeal in words and songs, echoing through all the years, thanks for sharing, may God bless

posted by Riversidepoet on October 17, 2016 at 7:26 AM | link to this | reply

This is so beautifully contrasting and leans towards a classical note. Well done

posted by shobana on October 17, 2016 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Aba

Wouldn't that be great? 

posted by anib on October 17, 2016 at 5:07 AM | link to this | reply

Being based on truth makes it scarier. Excellent imagery 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on October 17, 2016 at 4:04 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Aba

And if I told you it was based on truth... 

posted by Sea_Gypsy on October 17, 2016 at 12:34 AM | link to this | reply

Very evocative, especially the witches singing a sacred song, ancient, baring their breasts ... This Shakespearean cum Greek tales convey a lot for the imagination. 

posted by anib on October 16, 2016 at 11:36 PM | link to this | reply