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posted by teddypoet52 on November 8, 2016 at 3:29 PM | link to this | reply

Yesss...

XXXOOO..

posted by Katray2 on October 18, 2016 at 9:23 AM | link to this | reply

XXXOOO

posted by teddypoet52 on October 17, 2016 at 4:23 PM | link to this | reply

You are much missed beloved.

posted by Kabu on July 22, 2016 at 12:21 PM | link to this | reply

It's nice to be back reading again.  Lovely poem and interesting shape!

posted by Annicita on June 30, 2016 at 4:30 AM | link to this | reply

posted by teddypoet52 on June 23, 2016 at 1:00 PM | link to this | reply

Hello Kat

This is one beautiful poem I am reading after a long time. The rhyme and the rhythmic notes fall all so pleasingly on the ear! Well done.

posted by anib on June 3, 2016 at 9:09 PM | link to this | reply

*****

posted by teddypoet52 on June 2, 2016 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

Katray

🌈Skillfully crafted lines love. BC-A, Bill’s R👀st

posted by BC-A on June 2, 2016 at 9:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Hearts (Bahama Lady)

So very beautiful, Ted...

posted by Katray2 on May 19, 2016 at 6:58 AM | link to this | reply

Hearts (Bahama Lady)

hearts cling to that butterbrickle vine
she loves the sun
she swings
where the hornets danse
she has eyes
sweet eyes that shine
hearts cling
fairies sing
come to me long fell the words
blood pounding
and there we sat
unable to move
save for that welcome
throw of passions borne
Bahama Lady 
she loves the sun
hearts cling
 

posted by teddypoet52 on May 16, 2016 at 4:34 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by teddypoet52 on May 16, 2016 at 1:18 PM | link to this | reply

 Oh! yes enchanting Kat

posted by C_C_T on May 16, 2016 at 9:43 AM | link to this | reply

The images flow.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 16, 2016 at 5:41 AM | link to this | reply

Outstanding; I especially liked the last verse/stanza.  

posted by RPresta on May 15, 2016 at 8:23 PM | link to this | reply

Image result for flowers

posted by Kabu on May 15, 2016 at 5:30 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you; great inspiration...

posted by Katray2 on May 15, 2016 at 5:20 PM | link to this | reply

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Very well done...

posted by teddypoet52 on May 15, 2016 at 5:15 PM | link to this | reply

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Hello, Ted; glad you like!

posted by Katray2 on May 15, 2016 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by teddypoet52 on May 15, 2016 at 1:38 PM | link to this | reply

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