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Gotta go further yet Madam our best writer...Loving it more and more but yes, still waiting for a clear end...perhaps a post script of what happened at the trial.
posted by
Kabu
on April 7, 2015 at 2:05 PM
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No it has to continue, two or three sequences or more this will shake everyones life up.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 7, 2015 at 10:51 AM
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PatB
Great wrap up and maybe this:“I’ll try.” "She opened the door and pushed it open. It was heavy and resisted because of the slope, but she was able to get out. "
She lifted the door handle and pushed the door open etc. etc. Maybe more clear?
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 7, 2015 at 8:11 AM
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Pat
Excellent! And I'm glad Madigan is gettin' his, LOL...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 7, 2015 at 6:49 AM
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Much better PatB...but it seems like it hasn't ended yet....mmmmm
posted by
Annicita
on April 7, 2015 at 5:28 AM
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