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That's EXACTLY what it is. Perfect.

posted by adnohr on October 24, 2014 at 5:56 PM | link to this | reply

It took me back to the year before I married him.  Perfect.

posted by TAPS. on October 24, 2014 at 4:16 PM | link to this | reply

wow but this is wonderful. i see this as the ending of a love ...one pulling away before the other realizes it is happening and then at times, reminded of the painfully sweet regret.

posted by Kabu on October 24, 2014 at 4:14 PM | link to this | reply

PatB

A colourful thought of fall kissed by the sun.

posted by WileyJohn on October 24, 2014 at 12:10 PM | link to this | reply

sweet nostalgia

posted by Annicita on October 24, 2014 at 11:39 AM | link to this | reply

Pat

Very nice! It has the unexpected intensity of a warm October day...

posted by Nautikos on October 24, 2014 at 11:35 AM | link to this | reply

Sweet Pat and still with that essence of mystery.

posted by C_C_T on October 24, 2014 at 6:24 AM | link to this | reply