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Re: CCT,
Technically, it is a syllable break-up of 5/7/5. True haiku also is very metaphoric, using nature to explore humanity, or to simply show how small humans are, in the whole picture.
posted by
Ciel
on August 26, 2014 at 12:50 PM
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The scene is beautiful after a storm.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 26, 2014 at 10:12 AM
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Good explanation, I was once told the form but I soon forget.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 26, 2014 at 9:46 AM
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I enjoyed these two evocative poems - just thinking of the fresh
air after a soothing rain...
posted by
Pat_B
on August 26, 2014 at 4:40 AM
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Lovely! I would have loved to experience that storm.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 25, 2014 at 10:39 PM
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Lovely, Ciel! I can sit for hours watching a storm and it's aftermath.
posted by
adnohr
on August 25, 2014 at 10:34 PM
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Just boosiful...it is sometimes just so fresh, clen and the colors so bright after a storm
posted by
Kabu
on August 25, 2014 at 6:09 PM
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